Another revisiting, any suggestions for revising?


strung out, shot up, spent;
trashed accident.
have substance- fill hollow,
have plot writ follow
pent up, fed up, miffed
gat if catch drift
fraction of shard
of images broken 'cuz hit hard
i've been cut up, shut down, strapped
i've dealt demons , bought crap
i'm pouring out vile
, slipping grip of 20 years in denial

i strung out, shot up, spent; trashed accident. have substance- fill hollow, have plot writ follow pent up, fed up, miffed gat if catch drift fraction of shard of images broken 'cuz hit hard i've been cut up, shut down,...


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