Will you comment on my new piece of claptrap?

since poem's beauty in eye of reader,
must me, second stanza made it,
completed it, gave meaning satisfied me when finished it.
2 perfect taste , need,
thank , applaud you!

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not
on walls of caves
or underneath stone.
wisdom seeking

stay unknown.

instead
within heart
, trust in find.
simple truth
there, , that’s
god designed.

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