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suburban houses line street
idyllic perfection, compact , neat
flimsy facade gives wearing thin
exteriors crumble let see in
howling dogs give night voice
so-called masters enslaved choice

pick lock , step inside,
cross threshold, devil's bride
feet sinking inches of dust
dead air cradling flecks of rust
peer through gloom of spiders' snares,
smother compassion, abandon cares

robots sit in stupor, in trance
in eyes, demons dance
mouths shut billfold gags
gasping breaths filtered body bags
tv static murders quiet
corpses rebel, conformist riot

turn , stumble through dark
step cautiously, leave behind no spark
cross rubble of dumpster-bound dreams
perfect wasteland's not seems
not raze palace of lies
leave behind, dominion of flies

suburban houses line street idyllic perfection, compact , neat flimsy facade gives wearing thin exteriors crumble let see in howling dogs give night voice so-called masters enslaved choice pick lock , step inside, cross threshold, devil's bride feet sinking...

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