What do you think of my poem?

thoughts helpful:

there comes time when summer ends
sun fall
winter breeze seeps deeper in
, forget

it's not life better
murmer of dream
darkness seemed idealized
, flies - seemed gleam

ask why let in
when autumn snuck close
foolish me , poppy seeds
not foresee ghost

effect on me t'was profound
, remains there ever still
fear when returns once more
let's winter stay me - until

just thoughts helpful: there comes time when summer ends sun fall winter breeze seeps deeper in , forget it's not life better murmer of dream darkness seemed idealized , flies - seemed gleam ask why...

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