Angsty Teen Poetry Contest (for me anyways...)?


school literary magazine having angsty teen poetry contest. in order win prize, i'll need feedback on angstiness , cheesiness of poem.

@ last, you've come
oh ferryman.
anticipated arrival
arched on porcelain bowl
reeking acrid
rejected nourishment.
take bitter gold
, me
towards tumulus
on ground
, cold setting sun.
place me among lilies
below tinkling stars
of diamonds
, let past
dissolve.

my school literary magazine having angsty teen poetry contest. in order win prize, i'll need feedback on angstiness , cheesiness of poem. @ last, you've come oh ferryman. anticipated arrival arched on porcelain bowl reeking acrid rejected...


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