How can I improve my poem?? :)))?

i'm not @ writing poems. think second poem i've written one( don't have experience) haha :)) want join competition don't think enough, feed back.... thank , please don't harsh :)


belonging
wants fit in it’s part of life
can terribly hard
wandering around find place belong
hearts can break little shards
rejections, happens
animals belong together.

feel pressured pretend be,
we’re not, worth it?
impress? why should live lie?
hurt weren’t same?
being different others never wrong. it?

shallow society hurts people, being unique
values no longer seen essential
individuality needed in world.
each beautiful flower each
person has unique place in our world’s garden.

i'm not @ writing poems. think second poem i've written one( don't have experience) haha :)) want join competition don't think enough, feed back.... thank , please don't harsh :) belonging everyone...

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