Is this song good that I wrote? :)?

writing 3 songs (this second one) last few questions asked other 1 , lots of people liked it. here one. please don't steal , not singing or selling it. not gonna hear on radio because i'm 13 year old girl ha ha there aren't changes.
not finished song , write songs guys sing, reason have trouble making song girl sing...

anyways called 'hold closer tonight

no 1 else can see
holding hand
laying beside me
doing can

beautiful smile
beautiful lie
, loved while
can't figure out why

hold closerr... tonight

give me hand
don't let go
have been
need know
broken heart
fix
should hear
it's not forever

how know
how last
let show
can't go

broken heart
fix
should hear
it's not forever

hold closer... tonight

give space
trying on
left in last place
doesn't fit

tell me reasons why
heart feeling lost
breaking in inside
felt love been tossed

hole closer... tonight

give me hand
don't let go
have been
need know
broken heart
fix
should hear
it's not forever

how know
how last
let show
can't go

broken heart
fix
should hear
it's not forever

hold closer... tonight




not rap song or country, maybe slow pop song or somehing

thanks!

writing 3 songs (this second one) last few questions asked other 1 , lots of people liked it. here one. please don't steal , not singing or selling it. not gonna hear on radio because i'm 13 year old girl ha ha there aren't changes. i...

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