Poetry feedback please?

winter blossoms, withered, growing.
summer waiting, watching, knowing.
heavens silver rivers flowing, droplets falling, whistling, glowing.
screaming wind listening, blowing
while fearful men away stowing, minds , souls in barrels holes, memory , spirit free yet enclosed.
mix , mingle such juxtaposed.
weathers approaching, choose wisely clothes.
endeavours encroaching, turn , run.
dangers have names, both parents , sons.
blame? these or ones?
held out flames appease cold ones, embraces , blades sharp tongues.
faces fade in dark , sun, places we've made, let's embark, it's begun.
safe in shade smile.
fun.

winter blossoms, withered, growing. summer waiting, watching, knowing. heavens silver rivers flowing, droplets falling, whistling, glowing. screaming wind listening, blowing while fearful men away stowing, minds , souls in barrels holes, memory , spirit free yet enclosed. to...

Arts & Humanities Poetry Next