What can you C/C on this serious but also humorous poem {Conium} by the Greek poet?

conium

airy moves thinker tried gulp
1 more full glass of potent liquor,
'das zould bee iit', said, in english calque,
'afta zis bottle i'll quitter'.

mind analyzed why socrates drunk,
instead of pure nectar, conium,
started writing knowing flunk,
, pen's gems zirconium.

drunk , gargled eighty proof gold,
in blurring vision philipp lenard laughed,
, karl max planck's postulate did unfold
quantized integration calculus' craft.

wondered if philosopher's norm
electromagnetic energy,
solely emit in quantized form,
discover' of last century.

(you know in zis vorld ze gut schnapps rare,
slivovitz und aquavit und kirsch) ,
read somewhere drinks aware,
- 'chain nuclear reactions' book of frisch,

outraged saw drink's surface descend,
airy moves called liquor store,
maxwell's equations started blend,
through electrodynamics slept snore.

© 02-09-2013, giorgio veneto, rights reserved
(an iambic pentameter poem against excessive alcohol consumption.)

maybe can tackle aforementioned problem more eloquently. therefore waiting; read new poems, "humorous" poets of yaps, high standards of respectful-balanced behavior , international etiquette.

conium airy moves thinker tried gulp 1 more full glass of potent liquor, 'das zould bee iit', said, in english calque, 'afta zis bottle i'll quitter'. mind analyzed why socrates drunk, instead of pure nectar, conium, started writing knowing he...

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