Pretending to seek opinions on my poem, but really only accepting praise?


hi everyone, think i'm deep , special. read poem because i'm convinced you'll amazed me am.

first cliché line
must make rhyme
meter's crime
metaphor. whine.

lyk soooo dark , gloomy
way misunderstood
teen angsty , moody
see how brood???


isolation, goth, wretched despair
tried highlights
in muh nonconformist purple hair

hairdresser screwed
life lie
priorities, perspective
why bother? whyyyy???

darkness surrounds me. gaping void, once soul roamed free. bleeding eyes mourn lost completion. pez dispenser... is... empty.

hi everyone, think i'm deep , special. read poem because i'm convinced you'll amazed me am. first cliché line must make rhyme meter's crime metaphor. whine. lyk soooo dark , gloomy way misunderstood teen angsty , moody see how brood??? isolation, so...


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