What do you think of my poem?

creative , beautiful. although phonically sounds good, may further smooth words. (what meant here try write yourself, naturally, in flow, without thinking of quality or right words, write yourself). best

how want float in
blackness of space, such
eternally quiet place ,
fly through heavens i'd
race in unfathenable
timely pace , if
hibernate, yet ever awake,

dream state.

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