Rate my poem, Please. First Poem of 2013.?

here
begun
have no fear
you're 1
make me smile
when days grey.
make me happy
on darkest day
when hope lost
ran fray
here
, hope stay
though time foe
keeps me fearful
both know
must must stay cheerful
our time
no 1 shall take
rhyme
, no longer wait
welcome heart
few preside
start
future neither can decide
hope our light
fear foe.
fight.
know.
meant stay.
or shall go?
must wait
, try best
while me
shall soar
on rest.

don't harsh. first poem of year. longest poem. used love writing poetry. ore or less being scared losing not worry because neither 1 of can change fate. :) no matter how happy 1 makes no 1 person can stop happens. :) suggest things make better if wish please nothing harsh.

its here begun have no fear you're 1 make me smile when days grey. make me happy on darkest day when hope lost ran fray here , hope stay though time foe keeps me fearful both know must...

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