More Haikus experts required..?
enjoy haiku format day.vid, though far being expert in of anything. while realize accepted form has become 5-7-5, wasn't originated in way, think?
if effort combine 4 haiku's in sense of theme, did well. if meant follow 5-7-5 think off that, again, no sin. entirety of piece works well.
can hear surge?
terminus shore
sun looking down.
reflection starts image.
open cage door
, enjoy freedom.
roads melting.
sweating heat
feel road.
can push me gently
care needed
bruise quiet easily.
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