What do you think of my first poem?

feeling down, , instead of making wrong decision do, decided write poem. wondering thought of it.

worry past,
looking back.
went fast,
making me second geuss every decision ever made fades black.

past on & gone,
not dwell long,
if past eats alive every dawn,
how can think of you've done wrong?

need second chance,
things right once more.
@ second glance,
who's wouldn't still lying broken on floor?

surely second chance save me hell of world,
or @ least make bearable day,
maybe mess have created unfurl.
, wouldn't gray.

i feeling down, , instead of making wrong decision do, decided write poem. wondering thought of it. worry past, looking back. went fast, making me second geuss every decision ever made fades black....

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