What do you think of my poet/poem?

still new , tell me think? can want can take constructive criticisms.. thanks..

stood on rocky , dirty sand , feel emptiness inside me , sharp pain
not let go, 1 changed life feel each day
tried forget these memories still stays here me wish me
here on cliff talking , way make feel better
how can start on again while found new in you’re life
said still love never hear me try not cry
because man , makes difficult hold on
while darkness comes in waited until dawn
it’s late, never come still feel , that’s our bond
, mean never leave stand here last goodbye
if turn time , return love use have
if have in arms 1 more time hold tighter , love in ears
if here me you’ll never forget , kisses on cheeks
, beautiful eyes have makes me stare night, , beautiful smile shines bright sun
, 1 kiss shoots across stars , distance
think of ‘til , we’ll never fall apart have him , arms on makes me feel cold , breeze blowing onto me
saw kissed him thinking never felt same did still breaks heart , it’s breaking pieces
cut me in half never knew 1 , shun me away , no more eye contact again
no 1 can’t fix still fight scars , if love me again
couldn’t stand longer , before go
not go back…
i’m gonna go fall goodbye…

i still new , tell me think? can want can take constructive criticisms.. thanks.. stood on rocky , dirty sand , feel emptiness inside me , sharp pain not let go, 1 changed life feel each day i...

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