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there once crocodile schoolteacher
know sound weird
go school disguised in 3 peice suit
, long curly stick on beard
other teachers adored him
children thought sweet
, instead of giving him apples
ask lumps of meat
nobody suspicious
dont notice obvious
calling himself mr snappy
thought of gave away
pupils started disappearing
, nobody quite figure
class getting smaller
mr snappy getting bigger
caught out accident
1 of pupils little dave
saw crocodile on t.v
, said dad mr snappy has had shave
next day arrested
, taken off jail
handcuffed hands
, handcuffed feet tail
number of victims mystery
did eat children taught?
day came
when had stand trial @ court
jury gave verdict not guilty
margin of 8 jurors 2
defence crocodile
eating people crocodiles
governors tried stop him teaching
put fight of fights
union got involved
, said has animal rights
wouldnt believe hes @ school teaching
know, farce
hes allowed teach students
behind cage @ front of class

there once crocodile schoolteacher know sound weird go school disguised in 3 peice suit , long curly stick on beard other teachers adored him children thought sweet , instead of giving him apples ask lumps of meat nobody was...

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