A Poem I Just Made, Comments?

haven't written poetry in few years, needed 1 out. literally made few minutes ago, straight head paper forgive me. anyways, feedback nice, thanks.

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feel
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have feel quite bit different
normal self

feel happy
depressed
feel driven
yet apathetic
feel moved
, still firmly grounded
feel love
heart broken
feel weak kneed
strong-willed
feel uplifted
yet still downtrodden
feel healed
know still wounded
feel alive
think death
feel solid
yet malleable
feel worrisome
forever courageous
feel honest
i’m thief in night
feel pure
scars of corruption

think of missing these years
never knew feel
bone buried dog
long forgotten
until happenstance rediscovers
, bone
have rediscovered myself

waking dream
feel shell shocked
world had once known
crashes down around me

though must
feel ecstasy
because living contradiction

so haven't written poetry in few years, needed 1 out. literally made few minutes ago, straight head paper forgive me. anyways, feedback nice, thanks. _________________________________________________________________________ i...

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