"The Way a Friendship Ends"...care to leave a comment on this poem?

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cold, tired, , hungry, made laplace
friday night.
no food offered , nothing in frig.
told park car in 'visitors parking',
should have been embarrassed insides,
or embarrassed it?
down halls, endless, struggled under
baggage...no help.
2 gorgeous rugs bought decorate
dreary abode...no 'thank you'.
told room needed divider,
struggled hauling heavy roll-top in place.
in morning, first words "no, put
back."
i'm in bed pain company.
went bathroom bath,
not asking if i'd go first,
in there time...

wonder left home after?


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. cold, tired, , hungry, made laplace friday night. no food offered , nothing in frig. told park car in 'visitors parking', should have been embarrassed insides, or embarrassed it? down halls, endless, struggled under baggage...no...

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