Can someone help me name/edit my poem?


pain temporary,
glory lasts forever.
pain makes me weary,
not keep me endeavor.

knife in back,
clouds mind impenetrable smoke.
there fight in me waiting attack.
overcome evil cloak.

trained hard , long,
pushing body past limit.
feel pain wrong,
makes body want quit.

legs , arms burning lack of rest,
making body feel weak , thin.
puts me through test
of how badly want win

obstacle time,
deadline lurking ever closer.
termination of pain sublime,
in attempt regain composure.

they pain temporary, glory lasts forever. pain makes me weary, not keep me endeavor. knife in back, clouds mind impenetrable smoke. there fight in me waiting attack. overcome evil cloak. trained...


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