What do you think of my poem?

think of poem?
poem ok??? tell me please, thank you!

trapped in bottle,
fighting endless battle,
watched life gone by,
dreams fly sky.

not glass,
did not last,
cries unheard,
echoes of own words.

@ last knew do,
grasp dreams pursue.
fears broken,
heart once alive, awakened.

glass shattered,
, burden no long matters.
once again free,
let dreams come be

what think of poem? poem ok??? tell me please, thank you! trapped in bottle, fighting endless battle, watched life gone by, dreams fly sky. not glass, did not last, cries unheard, echoes of own words. at...

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