Is this a good poem? It's not suppose to rhyme.?

woke today sun greeted me smile.
happy , shining sun was,
child new toy.
excited face day,
entered favorite place.

going friends locker storm arrived.
had received note horrible, cruel joke.
heart broke,
, storm grew.

outside trees shook scared,
rattling , forth.
tree's leaves fell ground.
trees shivered tried stand tall.

bolts of lightning lit sky,
fourth of july.
sky grew dark
, wind sped up.

boom boom bang!
thunder hear.
clouds cried buckets,
must have been sad.

rain made walked outside drenched.
roads began flood,
, air became cold , bitter.
think sun out today.

looked out window,
began think , calmed down.
there no real reason stress,
done , on , nothing taken back.

gazed @ window again,
storm calming down.
calming down,
lightning went away, rain slowed nothing,
clouds ran.

of sudden sun came out again.
came out brighter , happier ever.
looked proud.
of sudden,
beautiful rainbow emerged.


poem nature

as woke today sun greeted me smile. happy , shining sun was, child new toy. excited face day, entered favorite place. going friends locker storm arrived. had received note horrible, cruel joke. heart broke, and...

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