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wrote last night when thought girlfriend leaving me while turned out needs break sort problems has, anyways..... sent after wrote last night in 15 mins.
started ray of sunlight mixed hope , dreams tomorrow...
i'm left nothing taste of sorrow....
how felt like, how heart full...
can't hear beating @ all...
it's gone, heaven ended in couple of days...
thought last, thought it'd last always...
time spent heaven bright!...
thought never loose off of sight...
here are, telling me don't think our love right...
that's hope gave me took back...
don't blame you, i'm stupid ever stop giving love back...
tasteless, black...
fell, , heart not there anymore, deep inside it's empty , black...
go, have life, deserve it...
hope set soul free , love hope can earn it...
cause appeared me did, no longer remember it...
or appreciate or care it...
not wanted, know...
you're letting me go...
go? home craved inside of you....
i'm homeless, shattered , have nothing do...
can sit here , think of , redo...
did together, in hope might make me smile, it's impossible though...
promise never ever trust again remaining shattered pieces of heart...
love i'll keep myself apart...
you're not first 1 give me pain...
don't care if regret or not, pain stayin'...
wish fell in comma before falling in love...
never knew mess up...
it's gone, gone...
it's gone it's gone...
no joy ever come along...a real smile on face can never shown...
cause it's gone...
it's gone spring of love lasted lifetime...
it's gone strength of winds showed me love no crime...
take what's left...
i'm empty vessel now...
happily stuck in drift...
here, come shake me again , empty what's left...
useless broken body has no more dreams, no more hopes...
nothing stand for, no 1 hang on to, yours till last blood drops...
it's gone depth of eyes...
sweetness of lies...
feeling of surprise...
never able re-take...
smile, it's gone pretty face, had in me, take...
write feel i'll suffocate...
decided choose nothing on me....
thought it's better cause you're being unfair me...
don't know me...
else do, i'd had mercy me...
this? leave me nothing emptiness? go want be...
i'm not gonna there grab when fall, no can't me...
go search whole world , see if can find better me...
give things gave you, , still leave me?...
go have nothing against you...
don't hate, can never hate you...
, what's more stupid , hurtful i'm still deep in love you....
, if change mind, i'll waiting you...
because cannot love after you...

so wrote last night when thought girlfriend leaving me while turned out needs break sort problems has, anyways..... sent after wrote last night in 15 mins. started ray of sunlight mixed hope , dreams tomorrow... i'm...


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