Feedback on my poem? 10 points?


appreciate feedback on poem wrote. called devil's game. thanks!

body no soul , face without name,
i'm caught empty handed in devil's ceaseless game.
past leaves trail no trace of coming back,
try free demons keep head intact.

trapped inside head no route of quick escape,
thoughts buried in mind hides behind gape.
shadows of life creep closer great pace,
o, how earth stay same hath death took place.

i appreciate feedback on poem wrote. called devil's game. thanks! body no soul , face without name, i'm caught empty handed in devil's ceaseless game. past leaves trail no trace of coming back, try free demons keep head...


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