Is there any poetic talent here to see?

hello there friends, love poetry , helps me release thoughts onto paper in beautiful way, art itself. looking taking poetry next level , thinking taking english major in college. i'm 13 , have been writing poems year. here 2 of favorites far. asking if have enough talent take of seriously. thank you, answers appreciated.

beauty

oh natural beauty of life,
life’s natural beauty adored , nothing can replace.

wind , breeze,
splash of shore,
sweet smelling honey,
fireflies glow
speed of cheetah,
white of snow,
height of mountain,
suns natural glow.
, best of all, love of true heart.

oh on , on go,
don’t have time in world.

, oh, can talk unnatural beauty,
beauty reeks of ugly.
fake plastic trees,
fake bleached beach,
fake yellow light,
fake speed,
fake sugary sweets,
fake rosy cheeks,
fake tall buildings,
fake red lips,
fake reflection,
unreal love kills hearts , leaves blood.

on , on go,
not spend second more.

, no matter done,
light bulb cannot replace sun
, pool cannot replace sea,

building cannot replace mountains,
car cannot replace cheetah,
beauty cannot filled colors,
, fake sweeteners not replace sweet honey.
, never ever, long live,
fake lover ever replace true heart.

hello there friends, love poetry , helps me release thoughts onto paper in beautiful way, art itself. looking taking poetry next level , thinking taking english major in college. i'm 13 , have been writing poems year. here 2 of favorites...

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