Thoughts on this poem.?

not depressed,
can still smile @ pretty things.
, laugh when jokes funny,
can still talk people.
, enjoy nice days.

when go inside,
when alone,
there broken,
, fall sadness sweet
in engulfs me.
in mirror,
don’t see.
, tears fall
when i’m falling asleep
, miss
doesn’t exist anymore

not depressed.
i’ve been sad while.
can still find light,
can still smile.


thoughts, opinins, wrote it, wanted feedback before turn in tomorrow.

i not depressed, can still smile @ pretty things. , laugh when jokes funny, can still talk people. , enjoy nice days. when go inside, when alone, there broken, , fall sadness sweet in engulfs me. in mirror, don’t i...

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