Does my poem make since? I am writing for creative writing and everyone in my family says its really good.?


want honesty , wonder if is. if should fix please tell me. , tell me think!

leah g.
other side
theme write



compared

brainy, gentle, responsible, quiet, unique

things was?

not clever albert einstein

no gentler mother towards baby

these things compared

judgements idiotic

such no other person besides myself know of true being

told asked not responsible

yet respectful , kind ask of favors

if not asked question, why dare speak?

although words flow river

uniqueness not specialty

fallen snow flake shows true potential

how cold ice can become such beauty

know flaws of horrid snow storms

yet others no not of true being

i, not think

judgement misleading

society has brought think dream of

in reality simple girl

writing specialty, interrupts things wish describe

reading passion, gentle folding pages explaining each chapter adventure

seek

music reason actions show

such peaceful music creating me become such bore

libraries keep silent, not wish speak

wish think

brainy, gentle, responsible, quiet, unique

things was?

believe wish

myself, no better are

but want honesty , wonder if is. if should fix please tell me. , tell me think! leah g. other side theme write compared brainy, gentle, responsible, quiet, unique things was? not clever albert einstein no...


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