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every hurtful word,
, every tear shed
16 year old girl
makes way bed.

feels lost
no 1 there
world getting dark , grey
thinks there no cure.

world filled sorrow
mind filled hate
doesn’t know anymore turns god , prays:

"god please me
hate being bullied @ school
feel im alone
, bullies rule.

make me feel empty
cruel, hurtful words
wish somedays
voice heard.

don’t have many friends lord
special prayer
strength , love can try me there?

haven’t done wrong lord
, everyday try
after school when go home
lay on bed , cry.

want happy
, not worry everyday
being bullied @ school
can go on merry way.

lord if can me
rid of hate
please answer 1 prayer
great." amen.

16 year old girl's prayers
answered in sleep
no more bullying or hurt
happiness keep.

next day @ school
bullies left alone
16 year old girl
free roam.

made few new friends
wearing smile on face
no longer scared or worried
happy in place.

**bullying wrong
every person becomes weak
have different feelings
please think before speak.
-jasmine(me)

with every hurtful word, , every tear shed 16 year old girl makes way bed. feels lost no 1 there world getting dark , grey thinks there no cure. world filled sorrow mind filled hate doesn’t know do...


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