Can you help come up with a title for my poem and give an opinion on the poem?


background:
wrote because boyfriend , have been 5 years , there people keep trying in way, particularly of friends (who have never had serious relationships in relationships did have of them cheated on girlfriends , they're trying convince boyfriend same because it's more "fun" them) , boyfriend's sister. think may have legitimate issues , should talk shrink or likes cause problems us! anyway poem frustration them all. need coming title!

poem:
love hard,
it's hard through
when there's taunting
me , us,
trying pull apart.
i'll bite tongue
, i'll stay calm
bite nails when stress on you.
, know our love true,
because can't enough of you.
should save breath
, let
forget lies , hatred
we'll have deal forever.
because don't know when stop
putting pressure on us,
while rise top
of these lies , of doubt
, we'll put behind us.
we're full of life , full of love
, mine you.
need each other
come whatever,
i'll love forever.

background: wrote because boyfriend , have been 5 years , there people keep trying in way, particularly of friends (who have never had serious relationships in relationships did have of them cheated on girlfriends , they're...


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