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have never written poem before (except school) , wrote , wondering if i'm getting on proud fact wrote haha please tell me think poem , if should change or fix anything!

wakes every night
sudden rush of tears.
thrashes in bed
escape fears;
how can run away monsters in head?

i have never written poem before (except school) , wrote , wondering if i'm getting on proud fact wrote haha please tell me think poem , if should change or fix anything! wakes every night sudden rush of...


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