What do you think of my poem? Free verse?


chance take

i'm going today
i've never done before
caught off guard, things
words never thought come forth
we'll our eyes , see open door
before know hill run towards
except mine mountain high
waiting smile die
separated you, watching far away
waiting hear other story
take hand now, lets combine our struggles
let neutralize until rocks turn pebbles
until mountain hill, , hill ledge
leading ladder heaven
had taste before wanted more
wanted couldn't afford
time try new
prove can live out 2 selves
, betray 1 other never
take risk, take hand
let me prove we're not different @
have side have tried
had had chance @ second life
take hand , lets see goes
moment you'll wish never spoke
wait bit longer , continue on
climb mountain , don't give
never forget door went through
started glance , ended word
somehow knew i'd end
when bit lip, waiting turn
voice angel, couldn't hear
thoughts telling me impure
took chance despite fear
spoke words , cured
let listen me now, listen me
purest heart understands darkest things
when world judged me thought of
no longer felt dark, heart renewed
did today wouldn't
spoke eyes , found truth

the chance take i'm going today i've never done before caught off guard, things words never thought come forth we'll our eyes , see open door before know hill run towards except mine mountain high i...


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