Can you please read my poem, and who is your favorite poet?


lost quartz , odd blaze

upon broken hills inching moss,
there lone pillar's ashen gloss,
before vintage ivory stretches,
peace pulsed upon scepters,
when suns' erected wintry tombs,
on brinks of scythe moons,
before roved pinned grove,
gliding of blushing love,
set liniments bleached shadow,
under flexing of dyes on tower,
beyond north's patient night,
around poled dragon's coaled sigh.

vs.

love unto evening sun (venus)
daniel mapp

when bleached winter sprinkles all,
sycamore's wrinkles trembles
tumbling streams mutters,
ripples upon azure of line,
towards piping of hazel clime,
before wisping eyes of lady
longing masses innately,
beyond secular entitled him thrall!



please rate both thank guys god bless.my favorite poet lord byron yours? :d

a lost quartz , odd blaze upon broken hills inching moss, there lone pillar's ashen gloss, before vintage ivory stretches, peace pulsed upon scepters, when suns' erected wintry tombs, on brinks of scythe moons, before roved pinned grove, gliding of...


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