What do y'all thank of my poem?


poem girl thought 1 , cut out heart , stomped on it. no writer os suck tall me thank.

pain left me with.

pain of not sleeping @ night.
hurt of see you’re beautiful face every time turn around.
abuse of not seeing gorgeous brown eye every day.
discomfit of not being in arms @ night.
sorrow of losing you.
remorse of ever loving you.
pain ever having in life.

this poem girl thought 1 , cut out heart , stomped on it. no writer os suck tall me thank. pain left me with. pain of not sleeping @ night. hurt of see you’re...


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