Feedback on my first poem?
it's meant spoken word btw. i've been struggling relationship between parents , i. watched spoken word entitled "if should ever have daughter" sarah kay, took inspiration when came first line obviously. anyways, here is! if should ever have child, i’m going tell them when days flood of pain, can come home soaked, emerged in water, without shame. i’m going tell them it’s okay curious choices shelter youth, because it’s through experiences you’ll discover truth. if should ever have child, i’m going tell them walk world open arms , reached out hands, allowing knowledge comes through experiencing pain , beauty inscribe wrinkles of skin water sand. , when come home blisters on hands , feet or scars battle shouldn’t have fought, i’ll wrap band-aid around each , every wound, stretch arms out ends of earth , say, “this how love i’ve got”. it's meant spoken word btw. i've been struggling relationship between parents , i. watched spoken word en...